From what I understand, new posts have to go through the critique process, so I'm posting this here.
I don't think this needs any severely critical eye, but if there's anything that can be altered, added, or removed for general coherency and flow, I'd love to have some opinions! Most notably, I'd like to change the table of contents to be wider and maybe multi-columned rather than a long thin box, but if that's more effort than it's worth I'll probably leave it.
Also, the post is describing that the poems were written under the alias "Drifter". This is me, I just have a weird knack for sorting certain work under different aliases, and when it comes to my poetry, it's typically kept under that alias. If necessary, I'll link out to the tumblr sideblog where I've also posted them.
Thanks!
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