That: what creates the essence of a thing, and what operates a stable and orderly universe today?
I'd remove this phrase:
That:
Why is a bird a bird, what makes it different from a fish?
Add the word "and" in between the comma and the word "what".
Well, there are countless similar questions, and it seems very difficult to answer.
I'd phrase it more like this:
There are countless similar questions, all just as difficult to answer.
A world where differences do not exist
A world where differences did not exist
And only the Emperor of Nothingness is content to sleep peacefully in this quiet world.
Remove the word "and"
He is an unknown god, so he wants to define everything; he is an irregular person,
Remove the semicolon and replace it with a period. Also, replace "wants" and "is" with "wanted" and "was"
The God has decided: what will become the "definition" and "nature" of all things is Law.
The god had decided.
Birds fly in the sky, fish swim in the water, animals run on the ground; Fire burns, water flows, wind blows, lightning shock; Time advances, space expands
Replace the Semicolons with periods. Also, it should be lightning shocks, not shock.
matter, metaphysics,…
Remove the comma
Law defines each thing, law covers everything
You forgot to capitalize Law here
Therefore, after a moment of stability, the Laws system collapses,
Collapsed, not collapses.
The God felt very angry, sad, and disappointed: angry because the newly created world had collapsed; sad because the effort was wasted; and disappointed in the weakness of his own world-building.
A bit weirdly phrased. I'd actually removed the entire part after the colon and replace the colon with a period.
But that's still not enough
That still wasn't enough.
And the reason is still the same: Truth lacks what defines it.
Truth lacked what defined it.
Therefore, all Truths have collapsed
I'd phrase it like this:
And thus, all truths collapsed
Finally, the god also came up with a radical solution.
Remove the word "also" and capitalize "god"
the price to pay is not cheap.
Replace "is" with "was"
he is willing to pay any price, even if it is his own existence
Replace is with was again.
Next, the ∞ system was recreated
The use of a symbol seems unnecessary
higher truths define lower truths
Higher truths defining lower truths
and at the pinnacle of the system was Absolutely Truth
Absolute Truth would flow better than absolutely truth
smiled very satisfied with the final result
You forgot a comma between "smiled" and "very". In fact, I'd remove the word very.
because after countless efforts his plan was successfully completed.
I'd remove the word" because", and make it a new sentence.
He only loves the silence and immutability of primordial nothingness so he hates the newly created world because it is a noisy and constantly moving world.
A bit weirdly phrased. Try something like this:
He only loves the silence and immutability of the primordial nothingness, and so hates this noisy, constantly moving world.
Or something along this path
Awakening from the depths - after his sleep was broken by the noise of Creation - the
Replace the second dash with a comma, and remove the first dash entirely.
the king roared with indignation swearing that he would be the one to bring about the final destruction of this damned world.
Put a comma between "indignation" and "swearing"
A successor to the greatness of the Supreme Being - has evolved
Remove the dash
