The Library Was Never Silent / Discussion

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Microwaved Cheetos 09 Apr 2024 13:39

This is my first post on the website, I have no idea how long its been since I came up with this short story but now I'm finally brave enough to post it.

In the beginning, I was really leaning to the theme of sad poor blind guy who liked to read books in his past life, but then it shifted to more of the spirit of sharing knowledge. I felt like this version fits better with the overall theme of the library.

Snapdragon133 19 Jun 2024 03:16

This is very sweet! I like this little bit of worldbuilding for the Library. You have some issues with descriptions of characters or actions being unclear who they apply to, in the first paragraph where the two men arrive and when Hazif and the Blind are speaking, where a hand is waved in front of one of their faces, and I think that title is a little wordy compared to the length of the piece, but other than that this was well done! +1!

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Microwaved Cheetos 12 Jul 2024 17:04

Thanks for the notes, amended all the points you said. happy to know you enjoyed it !