Her, Tree / Discussion

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FleshMaddAvalon 15 May 2024 22:43

Another writing exercise. Given SPAG crit by the wonderful TopHatBionicle. I love trees.

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I watch the yonder hills
See foodwrenches toil in dust
Let their cacophonous calls
Rend our bodies to rust

TopHatBionicle 15 May 2024 22:58

As I said, a beautiful love-letter to nature's most influential creatures. +1 without question.

-THB

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-T.H.B.

smh my head

meltedbee 16 May 2024 01:57

smh my head, you stole my (obviously patented >:( ) Her, comma title scheme

In a seriousness though, another Gatoni banger. Your capture of the beautiful and terrible continues to impress.

NotAnOligarch 16 May 2024 03:31

mfw tree: {:
Great stuff. Lovin' this short-form

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Fires rage just below the surface of the ice.

Vishardsh 18 May 2024 16:42

tree canon when?

In seriousness this is a very nice piece about trees. I love trees. This piece captures that feeling.