Instructions on Falling Backwards Into the Dreaming Sea: Or, Midnight Is Not Morning But You Can Make Time Skip Like Anaesthesia / Discussion

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Stygian Blue 28 May 2024 05:50

Inspired by my partner's sleep problems, prior to the discovery of the magical .5mg melatonin dose specific to folks with ADHD where it'll kickstart but not override-into-dependency his built-in sleep schedule. The last one for a bit specifically about leviathans, because sometimes it feels like the world breaks just a bit when a thing dies. Many thanks to Snapdragon and Gatoni and Din-Bidor, who offered crit within the day. Crisp rose petals encased in ice chips.

-Styg

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What is life if not the contrast between what has been and what will become?

FleshMaddAvalon 28 May 2024 11:17

Like spring rain on a hot day. My mind shatters into delicacies as I drift down the cyclopean avenues of dreamspeak eventides. Art.

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I watch the yonder hills
See foodwrenches toil in dust
Let their cacophonous calls
Rend our bodies to rust

hazellines 28 May 2024 21:53

A slate coloured wave against pitch, jagged rocks. A glass of cold water on a winter day. Mountain snow in hourglasses. Chilling but with an easy beauty to it. +1

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Yours, Sevalif

Snapdragon133 29 May 2024 23:07

May I just say that it was obviously a joy to give crit on something you've written again AND that I really really am in love with the fact that the link between fighting the long winding leviathan and the train is such a simple but magical link. Of course the bumps and jostles of the train would translate to a dead leviathan twitching in its death throes, what else would it be? Your use of unicode is a refreshing format razzle dazzle and obviously the story itself is killer, literally! Am I sure what the message here is? No, not really, but it did make me feel like some messages were being slipped underneath my door and I'll probably find them later at the right time. Thanks pal!

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