Ramblings of Conditional Tie-Dyed Snow / Discussion

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FleshMaddAvalon 05 Jun 2024 00:36

Your wild ramblings are well received and wonderful styg. I love it. Eventually I'll post mine <3

I ate it so quickly. You're a part of my binge, my literary absolescence. Thank you for your gift to my life. Your words today made me happy, and these even more so.

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I watch the yonder hills
See foodwrenches toil in dust
Let their cacophonous calls
Rend our bodies to rust

Last edited on 05 Jun 2024 00:38 by FleshMaddAvalon Show more

Snapdragon133 21 Jun 2024 19:00

I can't believe this is at +4!!! What the hell!!!!!! I really like this, from the title down to the love you. Ramblings like this are hard, cause I feel like some stories will get caught up in the randomness of it all and forget to have a followable throughline, but this does that wonderfully. I tried picking a favorite line, but I can't decide between the marshmallows, biles, nicotine nests, and follow its. +1

Maxyfran73 15 Jul 2024 23:18

Never been too much of a fan of the stream of consciousness writing, and it certainly isn't as easy to read as more structured pieces, but I liked this one. I wasn't too keen on it at the beginning, but there is just this sense of escalation that starts in the structural and then becomes literal part of the writing and it's just an excellent way to captivate someone.

Easy +1