LADYFORMS AND GENTLEHORRORS, I PRESENT TO YOU, THE BARGAIN OF THE CENTURY! EIGHT PIECES, YES EIGHT, IN VARYING FORMS OF "COMPLETE DRAFT", ARE HERE PRESENTED TO YOU! SOME ARE TEENSY! SOME ARE MERELY SMALL! DARE YOU SPIN THE WHEEL? DARE YOU ATTEMPT TO LOOK ONE OVER? STILL NOT CONVINCED? WELL, IN AMONGST THESE LIE TWO, YES TWO NEW MOUSE WORLD PIECES, INCLUDING PART FOUR OF NO FEAR OF THE OWL!!! BUT VISHI, YOU SAY, I WANT CYBORGS! WELL, I CATER TO THAT TASTE TOO! LITERALLY ALL SIX OTHER PIECES ARE IRONBAND RELATED, INCLUDING ONE WHICH INTRODUCES, ALBEIT POORLY, THE CHURCH OF THE SECOND HYTOTH TO EVERYONE'S LEAST FAVOURITE HOLIDAY DESTINATION! WHICH ARE WHICH? LOOK AND FIND OUT! OR GUESS FROM THE TITLES! IT'S UP TO YOUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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The pieces are:
The Hurt the Willow Feels -Got crit, posted!
Spoons and Knives -Got crit
Blue_Paint/Black_Radio/Gunmetal_Actuator
Clouds Conceal the Stars -Got crit
An Inconvenience
Broken Concrete Walls -Got crit
Numbers and the Machine -Got crit
Archangel Screams Blind -Got crit
The last two are both about orbital railguns and total, like, 300 words combined so probably go for those. Also, as an aside, feel free to, like, adopt Broken Stasis, it would have been my second piece on the site but it's just been sitting in my sandbox for like two years because I wasn't happy with it at the time
Most of these I just… wrote because I had the idea so they're a bit aimless. Not trying to get crit on all of them, just pick whichever one you think looks coolest and do that. Let draft Darwinism run its course
I'll trade crit for these, just bug me about it ok thank you byeeeee
Edit: Okay there are now another two I'm tacking onto this: Exit Point (shortish) and Pneumatic (tiny). Both Ironband pieces. Will trade crit, yada yada yada
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