Crit request: Outside Of Gods View

Crit request: Outside Of Gods View

ImNotObtuse 15 Sep 2024 21:05

Hey guys, I'm looking for general crit on my short cosmic horror story. http://wanderers-sandbox-2.wikidot.com/outside-of-gods-view

Thanks in advance!

Re: Crit request: Outside Of Gods View

FirstOfficerShmock 27 Sep 2024 19:36

It seems good to me. The only thing I noticed is that you forgot to put an apostrophe in the title. It should be "god's", not just "gods". Other than that though, It looks alright.

Re: Crit request: Outside Of Gods View

ImNotObtuse 01 Oct 2024 19:29

Word, I don't know how I missed that. Thanks!