Crit Request: The Many Epitaphs of a Life
Sandbox link: http://wanderers-sandbox-2.wikidot.com/angelicalacrity
Quick info: short metered verse poem of a few stanzas.
For me, this is mostly a wake-up after a significant time of writing very little but real world scientific articles, but I also really wanted to contribute something to the site after lurking for nearly 2 years. I believe the meter is strong, with some minor deviations purposefully implemented to keep a natural flow, but I want to know what the general thoughts are on the imagery - too abstract? Too direct? Overall, hopefully it should be a quick read (and perhaps a bit of reflection on your own part), and any advice is greatly appreciated. Thanks in advance!