Crit Request: The Death of A Beautiful Woman
http://wanderers-sandbox-2.wikidot.com/the-death-of-a-beautiful-woman
Recently wrote a kind of essay on my realization of my gender identity, and was wondering if someone could go through it before I consider posting it. Any suggestions welcome, mainly just seeing if there are any elements I cut short or if I need to add more explanation. Edit: Got it beta read by some friends, comments still welcome, but I’m going ahead and posting