the moon, part ii / Discussion

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UncannyClown 04 Mar 2025 03:33

"And the moon, I forgot to mention the moon."

-David Berman

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zipzipskins 08 Mar 2025 15:48

a challenge to read simply because of how grim and bleak it is. your writing is fabulous as always - impeccable word choice and diction, with a gorgeous flow. you possess a major power of clarity in your poetry. there is virtually never a moment when i read your stuff where i feel there are words out of place or mismanaged, and this is not an exception. i hope that writing this brought you some catharsis - for me it's almost punishing and relentless. not a bad thing but also very much not an easy thing. +1