To the Cattails in the City / Discussion

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FleshMaddAvalon 05 Mar 2025 02:17

I love when you spend time examining smth small that someone else might pass by. Tiny slivers of life in an ever lengthening corridor of experience that zoom by and by, but you find ways to extenuate the tenuous, tiny moments, bring them into form of what they truly are.

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I watch the yonder hills
See foodwrenches toil in dust
Let their cacophonous calls
Rend our bodies to rust

UncannyClown 05 Mar 2025 02:48

incredibly evocative. enormous paragraphs always give me a little pause, but i think this piece earns it through its outpouring of love and profundity.

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