i didn't comment on this when it dropped but i did do crit on it. i don't have a ton to say except that it's exceptionally written as is typical. this is one of those canons that everyone on site should probably be directed to and read - it just drips with excellent, thematic prose, strong characterization, and rich setting, with so many details indicating that everything is so concrete in your head and you feel like you can really inhabit the world of these little creatures. +1
