Beneath the Waves in the Opposite Sky / Discussion

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Stygian Blue 02 Apr 2025 06:11

groceries: lentils, granola bars, cottage cheese

-Styg

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What is life if not the contrast between what has been and what will become?

AKAM80 02 Apr 2025 06:20

Grocery list joke is peak, but non critters won't get it. Shame.

But all I can saw now is a reiteration of what I said then: It's a wonderful little story reflecting on the idea of nature v. nurture in a more unique way than criminality or violence (though that perspective may be because I'm a Criminology & Criminal Justice major…) How animalistic instinct clashes with culture clashes with environment.

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Goodbye, Zion.

UncannyClown 02 Apr 2025 07:49

the journey toward being truly oneself is not a straight line but a spiral pathway that gradually works its way to a final center, and that journey is rendered here with your usual strength of language, not quite fully understood but also completely understood at the same time. pretty good.

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poet

Crow-Cat 02 Apr 2025 14:23

The Good Shit

FleshMaddAvalon 02 Apr 2025 19:43

This the good stuff. It was really tasty and fun to crit. Mmmm tasty I love, my compliments to the chef.

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I watch the yonder hills
See foodwrenches toil in dust
Let their cacophonous calls
Rend our bodies to rust