GUN I AM A GUN I AM A GUN I / Discussion

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Vishardsh 28 May 2025 23:35

"I was in hell, looking at heaven. I was machine, and you were flesh."

AM, Harlan Ellison's I Have No Mouth, and I Must Scream, BBC Radio play adaptation

Citation

Harlan Ellison."I Have No Mouth, and I Must Scream". YouTube. 2002 BBC radio play re-upload. 18:17 - 18:58. youtube.com. Accessed 29/05/2025

Thank you to meltedbee for crit. You get it.

UncannyClown 29 May 2025 04:50

goddamn, this is great. i love the way the viscera teems from every sentence, the way that the leader of this pack has to bury his humanity in order to secure his pay, the way that the weapon is rendered with more depth and tenderness than the person firing it. excellent work.

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daviiid 30 May 2025 12:13

Really great piece. I don't have anything to say that isn't better experienced by just reading the story, but I wanted to go out of my way to comment because I really enjoyed this. Your work continues to be consistently some of the finest on the site. Thumbs up

FleshMaddAvalon 02 Jun 2025 11:32

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS THIS I SMY SHIT THE OBJECIFIED EXISTENCE TH SIGHT OF ONLY WHAT THEY WANT YOU TO SEE!!!!!!!!!!!!

this is very similar to a concept i was developing n *hack cough vomit* the SCP site but you raly made that idea lot simpler and filled it with blod and viscera and feelig. this is good shit.

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I watch the yonder hills
See foodwrenches toil in dust
Let their cacophonous calls
Rend our bodies to rust