The Sun Blinks First / Discussion

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Maxyfran73 29 Jul 2025 21:13

Solid poem. It's hard to describe it any other way, mainly due to the word literally being used, but it feels exhausting. Feels like lethargy once all is said and done, face ready to punch the pillow, away from reality yet it's only the beginning, no end in sight past the tedium and the berating.

Yeah, I like this one. Hope you are able to rest away the impermeable exhaustion. +1

UncannyClown 30 Jul 2025 00:36

i love the use of "exhaustion impermeable" as a refrain. it's so exhausting to read and say; it fits perfectly. very nicely done.

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possum_punk 30 Jul 2025 20:25

this is poggers. i hate/love the intense feeling of work-dread this incites in me. +1

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