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Green Moon over the Peacefield. Oh child, stay close to me

Din-Bidor 02 Sep 2025 05:34

At long last, the sequel to Temperance and the fate of the child born of shadow and dream and mortified flesh. I am slowly building something even greater, darker still, and the shadows creeping on my walls when the Green Moon glows whisper promises of destruction.

Thanks once more to the great AKAM80 for lending me his all-seeing eyes for this piece.

Thanks to Piesollo for making awesome art and allowing me to borrow it! This whole thing ended up happening because of their monstrous work.

Last edited on 02 Sep 2025 05:38 by Din-Bidor Show more

Stygian Blue 02 Sep 2025 15:20

Splendid, sickening, perverse, delightful. I adore the crime of Want. It is moth-light and grail-formed, and between those is the place of dreams.

-Styg

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What is life if not the contrast between what has been and what will become?

UncannyClown 06 Sep 2025 06:28

one thing i like about your work is how much there is to appreciate even as someone who doesn't care about this extended universe you've been building story-by-story. the broader significance of the green moon is lost on me, but the lush prose and depth of characterization make this an engaging read anyway.

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xexnoncores 04 Oct 2025 08:26

It’s hard for me to like this when the prose is so meandering, slow, and doesn’t build any kind of tension or real sense of stakes until I’m more than halfway through. This doesn’t have a very good beginning, because it’s basically nothing more than a long, extended monologue that has little to no interesting sense of syntax control or overall tone. -1

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nya? (runs headfirst into a wall and explodes)

find my work here: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/xexnoncores-author