Hello!
Just took a read over your story. It's very short, so I don't have too much to go off, but I like your concept, death as a (possibly) misunderstood thing meant to be a comfortable end to life that was twisted into something negative and terrifying, while leaving open the possibility that it's only been interpreted that way by the unnamed main character because he wants an escape from the terrors of life around him.
It's not very long, so I don't have too much to add…I think if you wanted to expand on it, you could write some more about how the idea of death has been twisted, and what it really means, while also upping the angle of ambiguity, whether or not it's actually happening.
Overall, I like the story, and thought it was a quick and interesting read.
- Skipmeister
