Crit request : Where a king weaves its golden tapestry §2 : Greetings
The second part of a series, not particularly story-driven, (this whole thing is mainly a way for me to let out the stuff in my head). I would advise you to read the first part, since this work follows from where §1 stopped, it's easy to spot in the sandbox, the parts are labelled (You can also see what I'm working on for §3 and §4). I'm mainly asking for crit on readability and style, as I said, there is not much of a story; it's not the point, therefore the piece can be difficult to understand (which is kind of the point (trust the process))
"Do not sneer at the mad, their madness lasts longer than ours, that is all the difference."
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Crit request : Where a king weaves its golden tapestry §2 : Greetings by 
Castaigne, 11 Nov 2025 23:22