Hi!
I'm trying to get back into writing on here. I used to go by Kilowatt/MrEction until I lost my google account and had to start a new account, that was about 2 years ago now. This is the beginning of a story building on a dream I had once. The basic idea has been done before, I'll develop, I know.
Just looking for some review on the current pacing/structure and maybe some advice as to how I continue this.
Thanks! :)
KIRQUAR
"You, you gotta get down there, like, with a toothbrush, you know, and you gotta, you gotta really scrub 'cause you gotta get it off. You gotta really try to get it off. But if that doesn't work, that doesn't work, you can't give up. You gotta, you gotta stand right up. You gotta run to a window and say, "Hey! These floors are dirty as hell, and I'm not gonna take it anymore!" -UHF