Hello, I'm a Story. / Discussion

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RecursiveRecursion 08 Sep 2017 19:56

These are my contents. It's kind of gross to think that someone is reading your internal organs to gain information, wouldn't you agree?
Okay serious time. This is my first piece for the Wanderer's Library! Thanks to Roget for looking over it in the forums! I hope you guys like it!

RJB_R 08 Sep 2017 20:00

This is fun, avoids being so self-satisfied with being meta that it forgets to actually be a story, and I love the friendly-yet-sinister tone. +1 and looking forward to future contributions!

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MaliceAforethought 15 Sep 2017 23:47

I'd never meta story that could talk before, so this was a neat experience. Pleasantly self-referential, not too focused on laying down exposition, and a pretty nice read overall. +1

fieldstone 22 Sep 2017 21:32

I enjoyed you very much and expect we'll be together for a while. I hope this isn't weird, since we just met, but I'm already thinking we might make little ones together someday.

RecursiveRecursion 22 Oct 2017 04:28

Sorry to bump, but I was wondering if anyone who happens to have a better understanding of the tagging system than me would be willing to tag it or add it to one of the bookshelves. Thanks in advance and sorry if I’m being a nuisance

FLASH BAM ALAKAZAM

(account deleted) 24 Oct 2017 10:14

The ritual is complete. And no, you weren't being a nuisance. You can also PM one of the admins about this in the future.

As for the article itself, I enjoyed it but wasn't blown away. A minor issue was that toward the end, the paragraphs tended to clump together. I'm not trying to fat-shame your story, but I do think some exercise could help break down those paragraphs and make it a bit more readable.

The idea itself is decent, but I never really got a significant sense of any real change in pacing or tone. Still, good is good. +1

Re: FLASH BAM ALAKAZAM

RecursiveRecursion 26 Oct 2017 17:49

Gracias, Gaffriend

Hello, I'm a comment.

RecursiveRecursion 29 Mar 2018 22:35

Hello again, everyone. Have you remembered me well? I've come to the comments section to let you know that something has happened to me. A seed of mine has taken root!

Listen to it, and feed me once again.

To Mister Story Book

Researcher Brooks 02 Aug 2018 07:25

I love you mister story book you are very important to all of us and I hope you feel very loved because if not you get all the free hugs even though you are a book ima hugs yah.

Maxyfran73 09 Nov 2021 01:12

Such a fun take on the idea of breathing, living stories, and an interesting meta article as well. I loved reading this.

+1~

Grendelnacht 10 Nov 2021 19:54

This is the most meta article I've read in the WL. I love it!

+1