The Darkness Inside / Discussion

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Trar 16 Oct 2013 20:46

This is a nice 'end of the world' type thing, and I thank you for considering my input in the chatroom. The grammar is a bit off, but it's nothing that can't be fixed…heck, I'll do that.

PuNKCaT 16 Oct 2013 20:50

Cheers, and thank you for all your help, very much appreciated.

Gold Star

Bunton 26 Oct 2013 18:52

I'm not sure about the format, so I'll just do this for now. Nevermind, saw the description hidden in the source.

This is my favourite contest entry so far. I liked the narration and the apocalyptia, and I loved seeing a bleak apocalypse caused by a child's nightmare. I'm a bit curious about some of the entities that are mentioned as having appeared, and I'm not fully sure they fit, but I still liked it.

Also, those jpeg gold stars look awful.

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thedeadlymoose 12 Nov 2013 02:34

Has some minor issues with cliche tropes & wording about the shadows and such, but besides that I really like this. Very cool.